We will always pick you up when you shatter
Darling, don't ever think that you don't matter
when you know we care so much for you
We ache for what you have to go through
They're stupid egos just seem to get fatter
Those you can trust are so very few
Darling, don't ever think that you don't matter
when you know we care so much for you
Death is something you should never rather
Death does not hold friends forever true
Cry all those tears that shine anew
and just forget all of their useless banter
Darling, don't ever think that you don't matter...
Because you do
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Yuna...I love you. You're my twinny and you're WAAAY too much like me. You need to see that you ARE worth something and that you DO matter. You matter to me and so many others, sweetie. Stop thinking that you don't. We're giving you so much proof that you do. 
Written November 28th, 2005
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If that true story is about making YOU smile, my dear, I'm certainly glad.
I love making the ones I care for happy. 
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Aw, thank you darling. And yes she did like it. She was the first to comment.
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This poem reminded me of the one you wrote for me, Rose. This is really beautiful, I hope Yuna liked it. ♥ You always know how to bring a smile to one's face through poetry. ^_^
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Awh! This is soooooo lovely, Rose! You always know how to make people feel happy and stuff when they're all.. NOT happy. ~Head nod action.~ Mmm'hmmmmmmm... True story. ;]
AND; this is beautiful. Another dazzling rondel [ Ohhhhh; you like that? I used a new word! ~Giddy squeal~ ]. Lmao. Yeah. o o; -
I thought it was, as you have mentioned that you like this form, but I was not entirely sure. It just throws me off when I do not expect it. Now, I shall have to go re-read it. LOL
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It's a rondel, dear. A rondel follow ABba abAB abbaA rhyme. That's all there is to the form. Thank you for your comment.
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This is a very nice gesture. It is good to have a friend who will listen. I would make a comment on the form, but you did not check it, and I am thinking that this is a form I am not familiar with. It reads beautifully, if a bit disarming, for me.
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Darling, if I didn't care, I wouldn't listen to you period. Unless I care for someone, I couldn't care less about their pain (cruel, I know), but somehow, you earned that and I'm not one of the easiest people to become friends with...Not usually. I love you, sweetie. But really. TALK TO ME. Whenever you need to. Seriously. I'll reply as soon as I get the chance.
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Gosh Rose. You made me want to cry when I read this. It's so beautiful and I love it. Wow! Wow wow! It's enough that you listen to me but to actually care is beyond me but I'm so glad you do. Thank you thank you for the poem! It's so sweet! I love you so much for this!
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