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Home Sweet Home





So long I've waited
Searching
For a place I belong
A place to call home
To fit in
And just be me
Years have come
And years have gone
Alone, I travel
Through the darkness
Of the midnight hour
Driving down
That long winding road
Taking me back
To the very beginning
Where family awaits
And friends come calling
Back to the start
To the place
That holds my heart
Where children play
And babies cry
So long I have yearned
To be free
No stress
No pressure
Just be me
Accepted as is
Loved unconditionally
A place of values
Where tradition thrives
And comfort overflows
Moving forward
But always returning
Back to the history
From which I came
With family gatherings
And undying support
Standing on the porch
Smiling at the door
Reading the word
Welcome
Yes, I'm back again
Nothing else can compare
Home Sweet Home

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Written November 27th, 2005

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  • honey bear
    June 7, 2006
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    very good

    thank you for this wonderfull entry,beautifully penned my friend and a lovely picture


  • smoking gun
    November 28, 2005
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    this is beautiful,we all dream of returning to our chilhood home where our roots began,good flow all around good write,you have a good day dear one---kirby


  • Celticmoon
    November 27, 2005
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    Awwww Mally ya always say such the sweetest things.

    As for expressing more of my inner thoughts.....one here and there is more than enough. Though everything I write is atleast a part of my inner thoughts in some way shape or form. I don't write many of this nature simply because there is so much of me I keep locked away.

    Thank you for your sweet words hun


    Blessings
    celticmoon


  • Malabu
    November 27, 2005
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    beautyfull

    awe this is beautiful celtie.......wow....love it to death.......you should express more of your inner thoughts like this......not just the sultry ones.... .....although they are hot hot hot....but this is simply beautiful doll.....worthy of a clappie guy from me ...... there ya go...lol
    Hugs
    Mally


  • misticmoonlite gold member
    November 27, 2005
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    Celticmoon..great write..home is awesome when you loose one to disaster, then to look on the porch and see homesweet home..it sure is a great sign of being home again..nice write thank you for sharing..Linda


  • B Chandler
    November 27, 2005
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    oh wow this write and somewhat close to a write i did entitled, "Long Journey home"...or something like that. But anyways the depthness of this piece is one to which anybody can related to without he/she knowing

    Rae


  • angelofthecentury
    November 27, 2005
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    like it the form and all great job although im kinda havin issues seein the screen right now lol keep up the good job

  • Ariethine
    November 27, 2005
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    Exellent

    Very moving, I felt your affections for your home and your overall ideals about it.

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