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Night Hope Princess Seeker of Light



In the silent stillness of night,
a Night Hope princess shines a light.
Hope eternal of poetic verse she seeks,
her laboring muse almost never sleeps.

Traveling across vast dark galaxies,
in search of a lighter side to please.
Reaching for a golden ring of meaning,
scanning stardust for elation's gleaming.

Her heart is pure and intent to please,
her pen to paper slides with great ease.
This princess lifts the spirit of man,
with sparkling verse to heal what she can.

So lift your glass in a toast to hers,
for your pleasure she scribes in verse.


           ~~~~Suseann~~~~
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Won a bronze in a run off contest
Written November 27th, 2005

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  • Mystical-Gardenia
    December 10, 2005
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    Excellent!! Well done!! Brava!!

    Excellent beautifully scripted "Her heart is pure and intent to please,
    her pen to paper slides with great ease.
    This princess lifts the spirit of man,
    with sparkling verse to heal what she can" So much like Night Hope... Brava !! Wishing you a joyous Holiday Season to you and yours


  • Night Hope gold member
    December 1, 2005
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    suse, please see the update at the top of the contest page... Wanda


  • Puppydog gold member
    November 28, 2005
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    A TRULY BEAUTIFUL POEM

    This is one fantastic poem! and the picture is so beautiful.


  • Sherry gold member
    November 28, 2005
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    Very nicely done Suseann written with class
    and touched with your hearts expressed love.
    Sherry~


  • Night Hope gold member
    November 27, 2005
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    '...Her heart is pure and intent to please, her pen to paper slides with great ease. This princess lifts the spirit of man, with sparkling verse to heal what she can...' Sighhh... How prettiful is this, I ask ya??? Thank you sooo much, suse...Such lovely sentiment throughout, along with a fabulous picture...I appreciate ya immensely, my Friend...Thanks for penning such a wondrous tribute to your ol' Prairie Princess...Love ya, Lady... Wander


  • Malabu
    November 27, 2005
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    oh my susie.......sucha lovely tribute to hopie girl.....and with song as it reads......your tender thoughts of someone talented and sweet to most she meets....always a kindness shared from her.....love it girlie....... for you witha sipoo too.....oh and a clappie guy to echo in your head....
    Huggs
    Malabu


  • NooNiThEWitcH
    November 27, 2005
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    Beautiful

    this was very lovely and beautifully written suseann
    an awesome write
    i enjoyed readingit very much

    awesome rhyme/flow...
    and a lovely choice of words makes it peaceful, cool and a bit mystical

    keep up the good poetry
    and good luck with the contest

    The title is awesome by the way!

    NooNi


  • Presence
    November 27, 2005
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    Ah, this is as ripe cherries on the tree! Beautiful, tasty, and sweet. Certainly you have captured the Lady Divine with your wondrous pen! Excellent!


  • Lyrical Soul silver member
    November 27, 2005
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    Awe, this sounds just like the lady of hope I've come to know. Always reaching out to others, spreading light where there is none. Nice job suesann!

    ~Lyrical

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