i fall in love too easily,i fall in love to fast,i fall in love too terribly hard for love to ever last!i fell in love with the girl next door,slim,fair and cute;but she wanted someone across my floor adoring him from head to foot!i fell in love with Julia,hey i'd swim through fire to be with ya!she left him for a rich punk,all muscles and no funk!!Next was Sherry,with lips like strawberry,i lost my cool when in her presence but smiling sweetly she said to me,"Ken lets just be friends!".
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pls comment on this piece for me.i was heart broken when i wrote it!
Written November 27th, 2005
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Wow my friend it is like you have taken a page from my life. I know these thing oh to well. Great job my friend.
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wow. cool style on that. the rhymes are natural and not pushed. It is a wonderful poem -
ok. great poem. and up until now, (judging by the im mature guys that surround my life) i kinda was a bit i dunno, sexist and thought that guy's didn'twrite well, 'cuz they had no emotional experiance. but lemme tell ya, you broke that for me and made me open my eyes towards you guys. good job, and thnx.
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Hey..this was was nice and sweet. I'm sorry to hear that you've had your heartbroken..it sucks doesn't it. I hope that you do find someone that will love you back as you love them. Everyone deserves someone like that. I agree with shawng...i like the last line it was good..keep it up!
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Hehe, a nice poem... I particularly enjoyed the line "Ken lets just be friends" A classic isn't it?
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