Lights
Pulsing
Music
Throbbing
Swaying
Thrusting
Gyration
Lost in rhythm
Bodies
Heat
Pressed flesh
Body
Touch
Exploration
Stimulation
Arousal
Withdrawal
Chase
Desire
Flame
Surrender
Author notes
Written November 27th, 2005
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This is a well written poem. Few words, however, has great impact on those who read it. Great pen, look forward to reading more of you...xxkandixx -
Wow how exciting...simple easy read, but very arousing!! Well done...
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reminds me of a song in the musical rent.
very original and simple
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I love this piece. Its so simple but its so physical. It makes me so hot just thinking about it. You very very very accurately captured that in the club intimacy with that person you'll never see again but that simple grind against someone elses body is enough to set you off. I love that. This piece really is awesome.
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damn! this is good! it makes me want to get up and dance with someone that i love...ya know...jus to get things goin..
anyway Great Write
-Missy
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