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Love in a Rainforest

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Rain… cool, soothing, rain...


 

The scents that fill the air
in the rainforest-
cinnamon, cayenne, ginger, cloves
cocoa, coffee, banana
faintly mingle with that of their primeval love.
Their bodies move together
in the midst of violets, orchids, and wild philodendron
that heighten their natural longing to hold each other's embrace
and share a mutual warmth in the cool down of the forest.


 

From two blazing fires in the drenching rain,
the heat radiates from their hearts, untamed,
beating quickens, in harmony with forest secrets spawned ages ago,
here entwining them under its quiet canopies grown from eons past,
and now in a seductive conspiracy with the mélange of lights
that subliminally encourage their primitive passions to mix and procreate
they become erotic prisoners of the forest floor.


 

Amid the growth, fermentation, and decay
there awakens a force of unpredictable and insatiable urges
that enhance their ravenous hunger for each other,
Like animals caged too long then set free
their eyes burn. He turn toward her
and she knowingly responds…


 

The scents on the forest air combine a spellbinding miasma of dreamy madness
as her soft body heightens his blind male creature passions.
He takes her warmth and praises the forest for bringing them together.
Her love beckons him through the soaking rain,
and he answers in kind to her animal urges now wildly let loose.
He seeks out her blazing fires and, finding them,
gives in return his wild animal abandon...
as the beasts in them subside,
a growl and a purr pierce the undergrowth...


 

The rain pours
dancing on their glistening bodies
sliding together
in a heated love cooled by the downpour.
They fill the jungle with their love.
Birds noisily acknowledge their presence,
lizards scurry away among the leaves and shoots,
courteously leaving the two alone
in an intimate embrace,
as the forest trees shelter them.


 

Rain drips noisily on the forest floor
as they instinctively make a cool bed to settle in.
They feel the rain penetrate their pores
and feel each other's hearts beat,
as erect passions cry out for loving.
The rain trails down the backs of their necks,
their lives take flight...


 

She, a meek, playful kitten until now
transforms into a lustful, ravenous she-leopard
overcome by unstoppable, relentless energy in the scented evening air
excites him again and again,
she cannot get enough...
this kitten in her
driven by such a tigress...
and he is her tiger.
Pouncing on him,
taking him by surprise,
she harnesses the force and power behind his strong reaction
and wins the singular attentive absorption that she has so longed for.


 

As she finishes with him,
and as she lets him finish with her,
all is good between them
and the rain is cool.
Her supple, upturned body
lying there underneath his
stretches like a slender sculpture of future hopes
and in a fullness and grace beyond his previously unknowing dreams.

 
They shed the clothes they do not need
as she clutches and claws, drawing him in.
Each piece falls away in slow motion, and revealing in its turn
the underlying pleasures that have not yet known the touch of the other…
She brings her defenselessly parted legs up in a final surrender
to his bursting animal passions
and the searing sensations race up her spine
and combine with his hot breath drifting heavily downward
past her gentle and bare neck.
Their burning abdomens heave heavily together in anticipation
of the first moment of heated ecstatic entry
and the deep plunge into regions yet unexplored finally arrives.
He tastes every crevice and curve of her exposed, surrendered body.
He lingers over her, with asking eyes.
Her eyes answer, ‘take me.’ 
He moistens tenderly as he goes
then lets loose a roar…


 

He delays, and plays in her soft vulvic mounds of happiness
that respond as her legs spread further apart, pleading,
then finally a gentle, slow penetration with a thankful tongue
causes the tigress in her to fully awaken,
and her flowers fully bloom as her passions begin to flow in earnest…


 

He meets her inviting breasts with a euphoric greeting,
and nipples covered for so long,
serving to entice and build an immeasurable desire in him
that is now let loose, releasing the tiger in him.
Now erect and firm, they both work together
tasting, tantalizing, teasing, fulfilling…
they are lost in what was forbidden for so long to each other’s touch
and their bodily instincts are now mutually awakened.


 

Reptilian eyes search for movement through the pouring rain
and find only theirs.
Her thighs enclose around him, throbbing,
and he enters into her,
she is now heavenly his,
he feels a feeling that until now he could only imagine
through the liquid curves of her leopard skins…


 

They now lie bare before each other, like gifts,
and up into her long expecting, swelling female form  
he deeply pulsates and groans,
filling her with his burning desire.
Her body begs for immediate satisfaction
and finds it, again and again, as he finds his in turn…


 

The crevices and folds she so long held back and that she now offers him
respond as he touches and teases her centers of pleasure, now softening.
She longs to be satisfied inside and out, so draw herself to him even closer.
As she holds tight he gives her more…
quickening, building up, then losing control.
The forest whispers in delight,
life on the jungle floor pauses in awe,
his erection now screams, releasing his loving essence into her awaiting insides
while the rain beats a gentle rhythm,
and in their soothing embrace
the jungle floor no longer weeps
but sheds tears of joy
for their love completed…


 

Wet raindrops rejoice as she continues to envelope him
in her tigress power,
she does not let go. They begin one last time.
The broad forest fauna drips with their hesitant pleasure.
The soft forest floor gently sustains her upward arch
and his answering thrust parts into her exploding shudders.
Her whispers scream in ever-tightening spasms of pleasure and joy,
and he cannot resist the lush, sexy, ultimate Aphrodite of loving emotions
he has found here…


 

Deep in the forest
there is a final long heave upward as two quietly collapse in the deep down of the jungle
and rest, embraced in a love, fresh, and newly joined.


 

 


 


 

Author notes

Derived from an exchange with Touchof1der in the misty past.
Written November 27th, 2005

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  • Colin OBrien
    February 26, 2008
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    WOW

    This is beyond compare. A great write


    • wbiro gold member
      February 26, 2008
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      hey! thanks for reminding me that I need to update my erotica list, and place my best feet forward...


  • Dreamweaver silver member
    December 4, 2005
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    EXCELLENT

    An epic write ... beautifully penned. A worthy winner of the Gold
    Congratulations ... Well done!
    Sammy


  • felicitisdancer
    December 3, 2005
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    excellent

    i think i was in that forest once...........i might still be not sure and enjoyed this and the great picture....i do recall a night in the jungle and one in jail that was tough to forget and the observation, a made for tv movie really that will never be seen.


  • Touchof1der silver member
    December 1, 2005
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    WoW! DOUBLE WoW!! I read this through twice and aloud the second time. This is very sexy and erotic but also unique in the amount of imagery you have managed to infuse here with your great word choices. I truly enjoyed reading this one alot Wayne. You have indeed captured my mind here. This is a wonderful write. Thank you for entering my contest and good luck!
    ♥ Touchof1der

  • wbiro gold member
    November 28, 2005
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    Thank you very much, Prab... or Khat... (now what do you like to be called? lol) Now I wonder how it would translate into your native tongue... which is... let's see, New Delhi... that must be hindi, or urdu, or marathi,
    or punjabi, or tamili, or telegu, or malyalam, or kanadda, or gujarati, or rajasthani lol my closest guess... punjabi?


  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    November 28, 2005
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    Is it a poem or a miracle..so beautifull i am just speechless..a great take on to the world of the eternal joy of the nature linking with the joy of the love and life time and time again. The thoughts are very melodious and just matchless and very beautifully expressed with its deep voice of the great nature. The beauty of the write lies in its concept which is a great and beautiful. The flow of the write is very impressive and just to the point too. I relly appreciate this work.prabhudayal khattar


  • wbiro gold member
    November 28, 2005
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    thank you, sis...


  • Lyrical Soul silver member
    November 28, 2005
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    yummy!
    ~Lyrical


  • November 28, 2005
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    wow this is awesome this is cool write i really liked it very much. Really interesting poem with beautiful lines nice tone and beautiful flow'


  • Night Hope gold member
    November 28, 2005
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    shields her eyes Nahhh, I survived almost intact, Wayne...G'night, Poet...

  • wbiro gold member
    November 28, 2005
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    lol, swoons and faints... I hope that doesn't mean I lost you after the first stanza! Thanks for the feedback, oh Wander of the night!

  • Night Hope gold member
    November 28, 2005
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    '...From two blazing fires in the drenching rain, the heat radiates from their hearts, untamed, beating quickens, in harmony with forest secrets spawned ages ago, here entwining them under its quiet canopies grown from eons past, and now in a seductive conspiracy with the mélange of lights that subliminally encourage their primitive passions to mix and procreate they become erotic prisoners of the forest floor...' Holy smokes, Batman...swoons & faints dead away...


  • wbiro gold member
    November 28, 2005
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    glad you liked my rainforest, suseann, may you never look at a leopard the same again! lol

  • wbiro gold member
    November 28, 2005
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    thanks, Peas, glad you liked my rainforest piece, and thanks for the suggestions, I'll play with them! Always good to tinker!


  • wbiro gold member
    November 28, 2005
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    thank you, my bright angel! Now go visit a rainforest! lol


  • suseann
    November 27, 2005
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    My nefew watches National Geografic a lot! HA! One long hot misty rainforest talented write.Just when I thought it was reaching it's ,ok high spots.Cuss me.It went further.This is an erotic masterpiece.But quit watching those natives on tv so much!Just kidding ya!LOL~~Auntie Suseann


  • Peas in the Sink
    November 27, 2005
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    I have to say, very passionate. Especially when you put the story into the aspect of animals and rainforest. I love it more for its unoriginality. Other ppl like to right about humans and sexual passion and I like your creativity with this. But I would have used a lighter background and/or lighter picture. The picture seems to blend right into the background. Good luck with the contest.


  • SexyAngel0418
    November 27, 2005
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    WOW... This is awesome AP Dad!!! You did a great job!!! I really like this one!!! It is so sensual and erotic!!! Good luck in the contest!!!

    Hugs,
    Beth

  • wbiro gold member
    November 27, 2005
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    Lush, sexy, ultimate, Aphrodite, emotions... WoOw! Words I just might weave into the piece, Zayra! Thank you, and an applause!


  • Heart Sutra
    November 27, 2005
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    This is lush in every aspect and I found myself feeling it as if I were there in the Rainforest. Something about rainforest is so sexy anyway, sort the ultimate nature is woman sexiness. Rainforest is Aphrodite! You have so much terrific metaphors and such a range of emotions to share within them. Well done.


  • wbiro gold member
    November 27, 2005
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    Thank you, Angela. Growl...

  • wbiro gold member
    November 27, 2005
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    Thank you for the feedback, dark chocolate! Yes, I had to make the background dark so the text could be read! A dark rainforest it is...!


  • wbiro gold member
    November 27, 2005
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    thank you for the feedback, crystal!


  • imonlyme7
    November 27, 2005
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    I love the poem, and the background is perfect!

  • luvdrkchocolate
    November 27, 2005
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    Ok. I wanted to stop and say first, that I loved the picture. It was really nice! But I do wish it was a little lighter, so I could see it better, because it got dark towards the bottom. The piece itself kind of starts softs and then seems to quicken it's pace. You got yourself a fiery mind there mister! lol

  • crystallove
    November 27, 2005
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    wow Really interesting poem with beautiful lines.Great story. You must be very gifted to write something I love the idea and the imagery that it brings to mind. Wow. Really enjoyed this one. keep penning'

  • wbiro gold member
    November 27, 2005
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    thanks for the feedback, Cyb... and I like you motto, although as a moderator it should read, 'I came, I saw, I spied, I left...' lol

  • wbiro gold member
    November 27, 2005
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    Thanks, Nimbus, for the feedback... I tried it without the italics, but then left it with (a girly thing, I decided!)


  • wbiro gold member
    November 27, 2005
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    thank you, shubs, I'm glad to see the 'animal' aspect of it got through!

  • wbiro gold member
    November 27, 2005
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    Well, what a coincidence, Angel, for PR's rainforest is the only one I've actually been in! Thanks for the feedback!


  • AngelicMistress gold member
    November 27, 2005
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    EXQUISITE!!!!!BREATH TAKING !!!!!

    OH, My! I love the background, everything... you took me back home to Puerto Rico's rainforest... and I had not even read this piece.... This is a work of wonderment! You have done such a descriptive job here, with imagery, verbage, etc... not enough compliments to mention here... I just say, that this is..... exquisite!
    your friend, Angel


  • Cyber Artist Moderators member
    November 27, 2005
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    Dam was this a short story contest! did you ever get inspired with this when Kimberly asked to be dazzled with your words you covered all the bases, but most importantly you told this tenderly and imaginatively well done I’m sure she will be suitably impressed.


  • Ink Shadow
    November 27, 2005
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    There are some evocative images in this poem...I liked the motif and the whole presentation, except the italic text. Will get back to read this once more...

    D


  • shubs
    November 27, 2005
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    Sensual

    The background created a canopy of sorts for me the reader.
    The poem is a living example of man's spasmodic reactions to love and in its carnal sense -lust which is a bit of a misfit as the words used although camouflaged in their sensual yearnings to the explicit goings on within...
    Man is an animal alright and this poem epitomises the adage beautifully and touches all the senses known to mankind.
    You have sculpted a wonderful work of art over here...Shubs

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