"With eyes misted over
Like pearled moons,"
Neither of us know what to say;
Silence looms.
This is truly the end.
NEVER again will he hold me like that.
Cause that not what you do
When you're "Good Friends."
I just wanna cry
Cause I don't wanna let go.
I love him
More then he'll ever know.
Of the lessons learned from this,
Only one sank in.
Love hurts;
All it is is a game... where no one wins.
Author notes
complete fiction ~~~ 'Cruelty has a human heart'
Written November 26th, 2005
A contest entry
- Finish my lines! by Cyanide Milkshake.
800 points, ended November 27, 2005, 23 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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SO TRUE!
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thanx
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WOW! That is deep and metaphorical! Showing early signs of a famous poet!
Great Job!
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