You came into my life so willingly
A warm summer breeze on my face
We bonded in friendship so easily
No one, nor time can not erase
You listened intently with such care
Opened up my heart to let you in
Not knowing where we were heading
If a lasting friendship would begin
To my surprise we really connected
A loving friend you became to me
our emails shortened the distance
Sent so many miles across the sea
A bond strong, will bend not break
Two poets drawn to one another
Rrespecting our love for our Savior
Listening with care to each other
We promised to be friends forever
In our hearts we know that is true
Tthank you for always being there
Know I will forever be here for you
Author notes
This is for my dearst forever friend who has helped change my life, thank you for being there for me.
I chose option #2 (smiles)
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I read Little Sister by choirangel
Written November 26th, 2005
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Seems strange to find a "love" poem dedicated to a friend and not some lost love
I really enjoyed reading this. My only critism would be "no one, nor time can not erase" double negative? confused me slightly. But then that could just be because of the size of my brain
Good luck in the contest
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WONDERFUL COMMENT
He is my dearest friend that God has brought into my life to help make it better. Friends are so important. I am so blessed with many but everyone always has a special friend that has a special place in the heart no one else can fill.. Thank you for the beautiful comment. Always so appreciated. Take care, Sandy
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This is very touching. God can bond our spirits no matter what
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Thank you for the wonderful comment. Yes this is a very special friendship. I was blessed the day he came into my life. Thanks again. Take care, Sandy.
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Thank you for the nice comment. I appreciate you talking the time to read it. Take care, Sandy
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Wow! That was a good write and it made me happy because it was about friendship! It sounds like you've made a really good friend! Good luck with your friendship and good luck in the contest!
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Very beautifully written, my sweet friend! It's awesome when you find a friendship so true! Loved this; it's quite nice and thank you so much for sharing! Good luck in the contest!
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Very nice and sweet. I know how that feels. Bi-do
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That is soooo sweet. It is amazing how quickly time flys when you connect with someone.
Michael.







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