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Tell me anything

Tell me, do you want me still
Tell me, do I make you feel anything anymore
Cause baby, I don't know what's going on with us
Just tell me anything please

So I can know if I'm just wasting my time
I hate saying it but that's how I feel
I feel like I'm
Nothing to you and I know that's messed up so
Tell me why I should even try
When you don't

Baby I'm lost right now
I love you but I'm so confused
Cause you don't give me the time of day
And you just keep pushing me away
I need to know what's going on so just tell me something, please

So I can know if I'm wasting my time
I hate saying it but that's how I feel
I feel like I'm
Nothing to you and I know that's messed up so
Tell me why I should even try
When you don't

Is this really over
I need to know
Cause I, oh I don't wanna be the fool in love with the girl who stopped loving me back

Author notes

fucking not so love poems
Written November 25th, 2005

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  • InTheSilence
    January 8, 2006
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    if you knew how much i could relate to this..well, haha...if you remember anything about me, then you do know. seriously, though...i'm sorry you are (were?) going through this...it's the most painful, confusing feeling in the world and i've spent many a day right there with you. this is so good, though. you put it into simple terms, yet they come out sounding so beautiful, so poetic. your pain was so clear and real. this is a very good write.

  • Zealous
    November 25, 2005
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    This is pretty good... I think it'd work well as lyrics for a song... maybe Missy Higgins style.
    well done