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finding one's self

finding ones self
reaching far and wide
from town to town
city to city
state to state

trying to find why
I was put in this world

to either make a difference
or to just change my life
I am not happy here
I need to find who I am!!

to take a journey
maybe Texas, Tennesse, Californa
or esle some other state

to go horseback riding
on some ranch
to watch the sun from
a stalions back
WOW would that be kool

to just find myself
for I had thought that I once new
but now I'm lost
I don't know when I will do this
but it will be a spir of the moment thing i think

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Written November 25th, 2005

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  • December 5, 2005
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    Excellent!

    A big question that each and everyone of us often ask, who am I?
    Well, my dear, this is really good and very well written!
    We have to take the journey in life with a stride to find what we are searching for!

  • PhoenixLiberty
    November 26, 2005
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    Hey just remeber there are people here that need you and want you here. If it wern't for you and a few others I would be gone over seas.

  • lenedreams
    November 25, 2005
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    i know just how you feel. frustrating isn't it? nice write i like your vision very much sounds wonderful.