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[Not] Missing You

And I can't listen to "our" songs anymore
It doesn't hurt, I just can't bear the words-
The lies that they sing, the lyrics you whispered to me.
You can call me bitter, but I'd just call you wrong.
I'm past what's passed away between us;
The girl who cried every time the boy lied.
I thought I'd never move on and that you'd never leave,
But you're long gone and I'm on my eighth mistake.
I no longer think of you when I'm kissing him,
But I won't lie and say that I don't think of you at all.
No. I won't lie. I think of you.
But I miss you a little less everyday that you don't think of me.

Author notes

Kinda old.. I dunno.. I don't really like it, but I just can't bring myself to delete even my bad poems. So there ya go..
Written November 13th, 2005

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  • InTheSilence
    January 8, 2006
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    this is really good. i wish it were more true than it is, but it's really good.


  • Joseph Montelongo
    November 25, 2005
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    Wow... I really liked this one... I dont think its bad at all... its really deep and it really paints a big picture of what this relationship must have been like... Great work

    -Joseph

  • digital tears
    November 24, 2005
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    good

    i like it. i feel that way about the relationship i had over the summer. its like you dont want to still think about them but you do and you hate it yo. good poem though.