I am staring at this girl, she is broken and alone
No one will come and see her or even call her on the phone
She thought that she had found her true love, but she was wrong
For she found out that he was lying all along
She is not ugly or hatefull in the least little bit, actually she she is beautiful and grand
But jealousy can be a reason that no one will give a helping hand
Her soul has been torn into a million pieces and her heart is shattered
She tried to call out to people and tell them her pain, but it never mattered
Now she is lost, no one can heal her broken soul
If only they had listened then her heart would still be full
When you look into her eyes they are lifeless and black
People could have stopped this but they never cut her any slack
She is alive and vibrant on the outside, but on the inside she is dying
She is sick of all the hatred and people always lying
How did this girl get to be this lifeless and mean
A part of it was when she lost her mom, she was only seventeen
Her dad was never around and she was with a man who beat her every day
The rest of her family were always fighting and when she tried to succeed they were always standing in her way
Her so called friends hated her on the inside because she was something they could never be
So this is why she is now cold and mean they broke her soul and turned her into something else you see
But wait this is a mirror I am looking into I am staring right back at me
Author notes
Please be kind but I would like any kind of advice or comments
Written November 24th, 2005
A contest entry
- Make me feel your pain :) by forbidden-colour.
300 points, ended November 24, 2005, 25 entries
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awwww good poem my hunnie
good luck in my cotest !!

