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Seven Roses

One rose
From a friend,
The purity of the relationship
Symbolized by a cup of petals
And a few thorns.

Two roses
To catch the eye,
To apologize
And distract the mind
From the horrid.

Three roses
From an old flame,
Meant to reestablish
To resurrect
A tainted love.

Four roses
Given as thanks,
For a love long passed
A thoughtful gift
And a constant embrace.

Five roses
For a broken heart
Which wallows in pain
And breaks every evening,
A reminder of what once was.

Six roses
For anniversaries,
Eternal strength and eternal faith
But mostly
Eternal love.

Seven roses
From a lover,
To state the message
Every girl awaits:
"I love you now, and forever more."

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Topic: roses
Written November 24th, 2005

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  • September 12, 2006
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    chickachicka


  • Faeleigh
    November 24, 2005
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    Aww.. This is sweet.. I like how you used a lot of my favorite words! Great poem, keep writing and have an uber shiny day!