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This Sad Symphony

A Broken heart,
a broken life.
There never was a
time that was mine.

A broken life and
a broken heart.
It was a lie
from the very start,
the very start.

And now I lay
alone again.
Touch me now and
forever a friend
will be gone,
will be gone.

So listen to this
sad symphony
It's all that's left
of you and me
I don't understand,
I can't see why
the truth was just a lie
So now we say goodbye.
But how to say goodbye?


Don't speak, it's over now...
        time to sleep forever....

Author notes

ya just some lyrics, i had the stereo off so I was singing to myself, came up with this. And ya, they aren't just random.
Written November 24th, 2005

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  • shurikai
    November 25, 2005
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    hey! no sleeping forever!! other than that great poem shannon ^^ loved it

  • depressedandlonely
    November 25, 2005
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    beautiful!


  • KatSanchez
    November 24, 2005
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    Beautifully written. I can relate to this very well. I feel like there was never a time for just me. You convey that sense of hopelessness very well. Great job on this.

  • la petite sirene
    November 24, 2005
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    very nice! i like it a lot, but so sad but who is this about if its not random?


  • Nae Blood-Pig
    November 24, 2005
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    that's awesome! i just wrote a song, it's called 'who knows', this is a beautiful song, you got somethin here. keep it up!
    c ya
    ~naomi

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