Tears as cold as ice,
My heart sheds the unpurified blood that we all hold within.
Insane thoughts circle in my mind,
As to if I can make it through another love massacre,
Or will it be everlasting.
I reminisce on the past and think to the future
Will I live to be old and withered?
Or shall I die forever young?
I watch you sleep; your breathing puts me at ease,
Will I wake up with you beside me?
Or will you leave without a trace…
Giving me a broken heart and shattered dreams.
I’m scared because of him,
I put in everything,
But was left with nothing to hold onto.
I had my brother, and my best friend to catch me as I fell,
But it still wasn’t the love we all yurn for.
So I reminisce on my thoughts, while I watch you lying there,
In a world of dreams, and candy clouded lullabies.
I don’t want to be alone.
Stop the accusations that you hold within your own guilty mind
Don’t push me to leave everything I have…
My biggest fear is being alone………
Author notes
I dont know,
just something off the top of my head.
There are quite a few spelling errors....but oh fucking well.
Written November 24th, 2005
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Thanks,
I dont think I write beautifully.lol.
I like to call it writing directing from within.
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Damn Donna, this is fuckin awsome, you write really beautifully. I think everyone fears being alone.... but anyways, this was great.
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No need for thanks on being there for you, I thank you for being here with me, I was sitting up and 12 in the morning thinking about mine and his realtionship and then past relationships as well and this just all came out, I thanks you greatly.
Muchlove
Donna -
FUCKIN AWESOME GURL!!!!
OMFG!!!1 this is sooo awesome i love this..this is another one of ur best....you have alot of good ones...i can tell how much u love him and thats great..im sooo gald things are finaly working out for you..you deserve it more than anyone...thanks for always being there for me i appreaciate it deeply....stay cool and stay up
love ya
Lacey -
hey donna..i really like this poem...good job..i loves you...
XxX
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Believe in the beating heart
Hey Donna, I love this poem but like Jessi said Adam needs to trust you I kno sumtimes things can be hard to understand but Adam needs to kno you love him and would never hurt him maybe he reacts this way in fear of losing you, idk but I do kno this Donna you are such a beautiful person you have a great heart and your a good friend dont let any lies people tell you stick in your head and when you need someone to pick you up I will be there cuz your my sister and I love you so much !!! anyway like I said once before this was really good and I enjoyed reading it.....ttyl
love yas
Sissy -
AWESOMELY BEAUTIFUL
I understand that you dont want to lose Adam, but I also understand that he needs to trust you.....
and to Adam(if you read this) TRUST HER she wont break your heart, she loves you so much and she dont want to lose you as said in this, you just have to trust her...
But Donna this is wonderufl, its really good I liked it alot...its one of your best ever, I hope that things keep going good, I love you dearly!
jessi
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