He's the kind of boy who goes around,
winking his eyes at all the girls.
And she's the girl that walks within this town,
she caught his eye,half way around the world.
She couldn't fall for him at first,
she knew it lead to disaster and tears.
But one night as he walks her home in dark,
he lights the way and fights away her fears.
He See's her nearly almost everyday,
and the way she looks at him is no mistake.
and if she's to blind to see it, he'll find away,
to prove to her his love is far from fake.
He buys her everything she wants or sees.
Even things she doesn't need.
one day she walks upon a golden locket,
he sticks a picture in it, and stuffs it in her pocket.
They spend each day as if it were their last,
cause soon he has to travel back towards home.
So he'll say good-bye and kiss her one last time,
and leave her there to fight through the unknown.
For 6 months, its described as love.
Sharing laughs,troubles, and ice cream.
and for the remaining time they have,
simple life is nothing but a dream.
But soon its time he has to go back home,
and leave her there for her heart to break.
But they continue on with each other,
cause its a chance they're willing to take.
She calls him every night
two seconds after 9:15,
and he picks up the phone
after the 3rd ring.
One day she calls crying on the phone,
he calms her down and asks her whats wrong.
She says she's cheated and it wont happen again,
he began to cry but acted strong.
and he sent a letter, saying its okay,
but the pain wouldn't let him live another day.
and she called him at 9:15,
but no one picked up after 3 rings.
2 days later, she receives the letter,
and as days go on, thing just don't get better.
So she puts the letter in her her front pocket,
looks down at they're picture in her locket.
And slowly points the gun, and pulse the trigger,
and slowly darkness grows big to bigger.
and he's not they're to fight it away again.
Author notes
Im not sure if this is what your lookin for...but here ya go. hope its worth the reading atleast.
Written November 24th, 2005
A contest entry
- lover's suicide by Trueloveneverdies.
300 points, ended November 30, 2005, 23 entries
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wow.....this is beautiful Kelli....tragedy poems are great and this one was amazing.....not even kidding.....good job....i hope ur enjoying texas.....catch u later Kelli
-Gabe-
"some things were never meant to be defined" -
wow.really good poem. powerfull and sure. Its great. Keep writing!
Irene <3


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