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Last call

A single cry-a shot rang out
suicide attempt prevailed
no more good morning darlins
Romeos ship has sailed

Her hearts rotting-in her chest
many failed attempts to breath
she can see herself dying
but she can never seem to leave

They feel like giving up
yet they just cant let go
fingers locked together
only their love left to show

Here they go-Dishonestly
Simply cant make it on their own
given up on everything
if they died tonight-would anyone know?

How the hell did they get so far away?
when did everyone decide they wouldn't make it?
one simple jump-would end it all for them
and with one last call they ended-Despondent



Author notes

I know this isnt the greatest write but I tried.lol
hope you like
JKiddey
Written November 23rd, 2005

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