A single cry in a corner
But not a soul hears it,
They all wait until it's over
Until my heart has stopped.
On my last breaths
I feel tears cascading
Falling endlessly down my cheeks
The knife in my hand.
In the corner,
Hidden in darkness
And shrouded in solitude
My life is leaving my soul.
Now all is left
Is my lifeless corps
An empty shell
And still not a soul cares.
Not even a memory
This heart has left
Not even a tear shed
For the loss.
Author notes
nothing to say yet...it's my first really dark/suicidal...
Written November 23rd, 2005
A contest entry
- lover's suicide by Trueloveneverdies.
300 points, ended November 30, 2005, 23 entries
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breathlessly speechless.
omg. that almost made me cry and im not an emotional person wen it cums to that stuff. that is so deep. i constantly feel that way and i no it hurts so bad wen u fear u truly have no one. but no matta wut ur pen and paper are alwayz there for u. no matta how small or big the problem is no matta who there is or isnt to talk to u can alwayz talk to ur paper through ur pen. ritn will help me so much so i hope it has the same effect on u. well good luck with wuteva becomes of u. this is truly amazing. it left me breathless and speechless. -
Thanks, Shandril. I'll gladly talk to KissMe-KillMe.
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...this is deep. I can relate, for I have felt this way, too, but not lately. KissMe-KillMe (on this site) also feels this way, so perhaps you two could relate and talk about things. It might help. Don't worry, I am sure that people would care, especially since you have so many friends listed on your author page. Be safe, and God bless you. Beautiful poem.
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~ Shan
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