My dear woman,
temple of my love,
guardian of life.
what have you done?
you display needles on your body,
cover skin meant to be caressed
with frescoes made by needles
displaying symbols of fashion.
what have happened to those breast i loved,
they were soft and delicate,
now they are dead and feels like stone.
filled with silicone.
my woman,
did i never love you enough to make you see?
or was this all for others than me?
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Written November 23rd, 2005
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You've certainly made some very good points here, d-amour. Sometimes I think maybe I'm too old fashioned, then I think again....what can be old fashioned about appreciating the natural adornments God gave us instead of trying to falsify our (Well I did go for pierced ears...the normal common kind
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I like the way you've stated your feelings on this and your emotional appreciation of a woman's natural beauty, which really is in the eye of the beholder.
An excellent write
Dee
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Good flowing
soft at the beginning and the end
great work as always my soldier -
beautiful scribe
i'm glad to see this. a man that appreciates a woman in her natural form. i love it -
well it has nothing to do with my person my friend its more a matter of who is playing the act and for who and for what reason.
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It is amazing how some women (and men) will go through torture to look better. Plastic surgery, breast or buttock implants, tatoos, piercing, and worse. Beauty is skin deep, they say, but natural beauty comes from within. Those feeling they have to improve the outside artificially, misses the beauty within, and it is replaced by vain and pain... Do I spot a little jealosy there at the end?
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