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My best love poem

 

I LOVE you my DRLING
Since first we met up
I have been, like, STARVING 
to lick your sweet butter CUP
Of kisses like sugar or honey or something
Its lonesome hear toNITE
Without you I feel THAT like I just about mITE
Slit my own throat (only joking like)
So our love can endure it will never bore
Me to think of you and TOUCH
Myself thinking of your
Sweet ASS. That’s how much love
I feel
And now my love is SuReAL
And my wounds in my old SOUL won’t HEEL
And my love is like a WHEEL
that riggles like a EEL
When I like cop a FEEL
And I will find a rhyme
In the last line
That is For a change the last dark time
It will be like fine.

Author notes

I find that if I rite luv poetry then the grls really go fr it. You would not bliv how many times you cn get laid - even using th sm poem agen. fan effing tastic. Also notice the romantic colors & design. They like the sensitiviti it shws.
Written November 23rd, 2005

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  • cvillelisa
    February 22, 2006
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    I never ever try to hone in on Plinky's guys.


  • Loveboots
    November 27, 2005
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    No, but I will if you want me to, do you think it would help me to understand yours?
    LB

  • Philogos gold member
    November 27, 2005
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    Have you read any other entries to this contest?


  • fallenbutterfly
    November 26, 2005
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    Well the first thing that comes to mind is unique...indeed. And if I may be blunt I did like it for the most part (even though its a bit juvnile) but near the end it seems like you were grasping for words that would rhyme.


  • Loveboots
    November 26, 2005
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    I'm sorry I don't really get it, maybe thats just me. I'm not sure what you are trying to achieve with all the weird spelling and stuff. I really hope you don't write this stuff just to get laid, that's just creepy!
    LB


  • plinkyponk
    November 26, 2005
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    qw can i resist you and your poem wot you hav writted its spectac spect spectacu very good and i like it a lot so me and you have a hot date lets


  • Heart Sutra
    November 26, 2005
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    This is an interesting poem. It certainly is humor filled and tongue in cheek. It is also got a swing too it. Good luck in the contest.

  • Philogos gold member
    November 26, 2005
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    You are one of teh few who truly understand this poem. I'm almost convinced that the musicality of the writing conceals deeper truths and feelings rather than exposing them. I fear that you read the author's note. So let's get laid immediately.


  • plinkyponk
    November 26, 2005
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    its easy to see that this is the real you if it isnt send me somehing romantic by midnight tonight or everything is off and i am finishing with you.so there


  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    November 26, 2005
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    It is really a great travel of the heartfelt sentiments scripted by the deep of the soul through and through. The thoughts are just melodious and very musical too. The travel of the love is the main focus of the write which takes us with your greate journey of love towards its heights too. The flow of the write is very impressive and just to the point too. I really appreciate this work.prabhudayal khattar

  • Gypsy-at-Heart
    November 26, 2005
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    This certainly is a bit depressing...but well written. Though a few bits seemed a little weird, like joking about a slit throat could actually offend someone, but other than that it was good.

  • Philogos gold member
    November 26, 2005
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    Why thank you for your kind words


  • NoWayJo
    November 25, 2005
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    nice pome. I lOvEd this!

    Jo

    P.S.: but never apologize of joke about slitting someone's neck in a poem. you do have poetic license, you know??? I consider it something like a hunting license and I've killed more people off that way than the average poet-bear!

    P.S.


  • Tarja
    November 25, 2005
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    This is so sweet. Your love is very obvious. You're an amazing poet, very far from a bore.


  • jantastic gold member
    November 24, 2005
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    swoon...

    I feel faint and kinda dizzy like. U r a awsum poemer. Keep righting.

    hehe can't believe how many laughs this contest is providing me with.

  • Ir.muse
    November 24, 2005
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    A romantic poem.I like it. Shahrzad


  • kryspin
    November 24, 2005
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    do me next!

    mmm c'mere you big studd you! rawr. what are you doing tonight? hopefully me in a hot tub! oh you studd. simply romantic you. and i thought chivalry was a set of kitchen knives...man you just brought it back from the dead, you studd

    good entry & like stuff


  • November 24, 2005
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    I enjoyed this but now I feel like Ive missed something important coz it didnt affect me in the way it affected the others. I read it twice and still nothing. I liked it though!


  • chills gold member
    November 24, 2005
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    You lucky sod... go do some work!!!!! x debs

  • Philogos gold member
    November 24, 2005
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    u c! it wrks! all the grls r gaggng 4 it.


  • chills gold member
    November 24, 2005
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    AweSOme, reely awesOMe

    tHis woz sooooooo, like, aweSoMe it maidME wanNa CRY - sooooooooo mch lurve in dis TrOOly wunderfl peice xxxxxx debs

  • Nicole Hanna
    November 23, 2005
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    Better yet, why don't you slit my throat. I need to be put out of my misery after reading this. lol Not many poems have... touched me in quite this way.


  • vaseline
    November 23, 2005
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    Without you I feel THAT like I just about mITE
    Slit my own throat (only joking like)


    oh god, im so horny rite now

  • WindintheTrees
    November 23, 2005
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    AAAHAHAHAH!!! Ohh that's great! My fave part is "only kidding like" that was so well placed. El oh freaking ELL!


  • Cat gold member
    November 23, 2005
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    it's super romantic

  • Philogos gold member
    November 23, 2005
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    Not surprised. You are probly a grl & like this sort of romatic stuff.

  • Cat gold member
    November 23, 2005
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    this makes me want to do you-

    m

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