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The Lonely, the Night, and the Venom

On a long past night the clouds were bright
From a faraway twinkle in the pale moonlight.

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The lights were on, but no one was home
They were gone to the place where the loneleys roam.

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The light was drawn from a melting candle
Attracting the loneleys to form a scandal.

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Perhaps they would not be lonely anymore
Maybe they could be like they were before.

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The lights went out... the whispers were so loud
The frightened moon disappeared behind a cloud.

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Darkness took over, and the loneleys headed home
They were gone to the place where the loneleys roam.

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The Night and the Venom were left to agree
Should the loneleys be lonely, or should they be free.

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The light flickered up, but the lone were not around
For they knew that here there would be no souls found.

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The villains decided, right there in that home
That the loneleys forever will be quite alone.

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The lights were on, but no one was home
They were gone to the place where the loneleys roam.




Author notes

=|... errr, yes
--Trillian =P
Written November 23rd, 2005

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  • DuchessAura of Brie
    November 23, 2005
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    hmmm...kinda hard to explaine my thoughts here...lemme think about it and i'll get back to you
    Lia