First try at Haiku
I think its weird, how bout you
not many words to use
Author notes
Firts haiku poem i ever wrote...haiku is a 2 sylable word isn't it?
Written November 23rd, 2005
A contest entry
- Silly Haiku [contest] by la vie boheme.
400 points, ended November 24, 2005, 17 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
Comments
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This is not a haiku really but just three lines of 5-7-5 syllables. I suggest you read some haiku by the poets Andrew Hide, haikumonk, Busho, trublu and Mari Goes to get an idea of this form of poetry. They excel at it. Goodluck!
Charishma
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Its true haikus are challanging because there are so few words, interesting how you use the first and second person modes of speech to convey your idea of the difficulty of writting a haiku.
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Thats for sure but you managed didnt you .
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