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Yo Momma:Haiku

Your momma so fat
She round as that freaking ball
Your momma so fat

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Eh..something silly! That's what the contest was about
Written November 23rd, 2005

A contest entry

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  • Sai Babas Lotus
    November 24, 2005
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    This is not a haiku. You can't repeat L1 like that. This is just a three line thing. Not funny.

    Charishma


  • Rikkusaki
    November 23, 2005
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    Silly but not terribly impressive I must say Also considering the two lines "your momma so fat" jokes aren't terribly funny, and also repeated twice in your haiku.