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Solid as the SUN

Tears of midnights fallen dreams,
In a world we spin backwords inside empty fading screams

But somewhere in the darkness
I can see the light shine through

Though its hidden in the past.
I can see who once was you.
Like a pose inside a picture
Solid look at Uuuu.


UR SOLID AS THE SUN!

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Written November 23rd, 2005

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  • funpum
    July 25, 2006
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    Of course the sun is made up of gasses...

    Well I like this. Very much. I'm afraid my rhythms tend to be fairly regular as I'm writing for children -though I have experimented! I love the second line in this.
    My daughter's boyfriend is a very good drummer, about to go off to Uni to do music technology. I'm afraid I am no tmusical at all. What is a skin professional? My son and I have guessed, a tattoo artist (because of the drumming!) , a wet suit fitter or perhaps a dermatologist!