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I'd Be You, Wouldn't I?

And the flames I feel
Rioting around under my skin,
their pain only manifests

My Anger.


What joy can you possibly find
In           Crimson making its love to Silver?
In         Scarlet and Black dancing behind your very Eyes?        D?
In  Hellfire Seeping into your being?
                                                                                    N

In                                                                     U
   a                                                       O
      spin                                     R
          ning                        G
              wor                        the
                 ld                            from
          whe                                         AY
       re                                   AW
            yo                       ets
                 ur           plum
                      head

I take a look
Into this Blurred Mirror
there's a whisper in my eyes                                    
                                                                      innocent
                                                                       no longer.



Right now I wish
I had had the courage
To mine deeper into the softness of my flesh,
   If only it would have taught you better.

                  But then,

              I'd
                    Be
                          you.

Wouldn't I?

Author notes

Ahem. To clear things up, these are my thoughts about how my friend could possibly be enjoying cutting. I finally took him up on my promise to cut myself if he cut anymore, in hopes that it would stop him. Don't I suck? Any thoughts?
Written November 22nd, 2005

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  • Ninque-Aiwe
    November 23, 2005
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    Thanks! I fixed the stuff.
    Uhhh. Yeah. Cutting's really, really, really dumb. Vuut.
    Spoons! *spastic licky thingy* Thanks again =D!

  • Jumbie
    November 23, 2005
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    Change the font color...
    In one of the last sentences, the word "mine" shouldn't be in caps.
    Topic was awesome....I'm tired of all this stupid cutting drama with our friends.

    Peace. Love. Empathy,
    SHANNON!