He once was her life,
now just a memory.
He once solved her toubles,
now knows nothing of them.
She hasnt seen him in months,
but she still thinks of him
every time it rains.
He still crosses her mind,
does she ever cross his?
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Written November 22nd, 2005
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I loved this it was beautiful...
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Ah the eternal question, asked it many times myself. Beautifully put, short and sweet
One little thing- you forgot the 'r' in troubles (toubles) lol,
bedazzled. -
*kisses* that was so good babe..loved it!..cant wait to spend the weekend with you!!..luv you lots!
-Britt -
reminds me of me and matt! VERY GOOD!!! i love this!!i love you and miss you hunny bee~!!!!
xxoxxoxoox crystal -
aww thats really pretty. i think you still cross his mind more than you'll ever know.
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awww cute great job xoxo
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Your welcome
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Thanks, I hadnt even noticed that. Ill go fix it right now. Thanks
Xoxo Stac -
This is a great write, I love it. I know that it's realy anoying when poeple correct things but I think it's meant to say "ever" at the end? Anyway it's a great poem.
Edited on Nov 23, 2:11 p.m. because ''.
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