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“Passion Flower”

“Passion flower”


As I bask in your beauty,
undressing you
with my eyes.
Futile thoughts copiously rumble,
as soft silk falls from your
subtle breast to expose
it’s hardened peaks.

Unfurling touch with a prominent,
plunge to a most glorious embrace.
Explorations tender with reverence,
tantalizing to a soft blush of rouge.
Faint whispers of passions sinuously,
fulfilling my senses with profusion.
In exquisite form comes a trembling,
of heated momentum.

Brushing nakedness of your essence,
soft traces of moist lips with direction.
Exploring places most sacred,
to once flower unscathed
now flowering
festively with quiver.

Sweetest nectar tasted with
contentment derived.
From this most precious
flower of passions,  
unfolded bloom.


Writings of Malabu©2005



Author notes

Tasting the essence of a passion flower

This writing had editing input from Red Red Rose.
Thank You Sweetie
Written November 22nd, 2005

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  • Candy6
    June 7, 2007
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    another great nature poem.


  • Malabu
    March 26, 2006
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    thank you Des.....I forgot about this writing......I will edit it soon one day....perhaps make it even better..... .....agian thanks for reading and commenting on my pages....... for you
    Malabu


  • Kylaya Halon
    March 26, 2006
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    lovely....

    that was some dangerous imagery...awesome. i wish my skills were like that. be encouraged, and keep on writting this awesomly deep poetry that ur writting.
    -Des2000


  • Iohagh
    December 25, 2005
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    You know you're good
    as older men should
    but more than wood
    is kindness, being understood.

    Thanks for your gift. Happy Xmas


  • Abdul T Alishtari
    December 23, 2005
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    Malabu My niece sent me this IM "I love everyone. I love you all. Boy I'm acting silly. Later on I'll be embarassed. Screw it that is then and this is now. I love you guys. Ciao now."

    God bless you guys.


  • Celticmoon
    November 24, 2005
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    My my Mally...
    So sweet and sensual......I love it!
    Tis words such as these that leave ones heart longing
    Such words leave ones soul burning with desire
    They leave a pulsating wanting in regions that long to be conquered

    Amazing!


    Blessings
    celticmoon

  • meena krish
    November 23, 2005
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    Very descriptive! Passion at it's best and sensually delightful..excellent write. Good luck in the contest..take care~

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