Old souls, kindred souls
Wondering lost and alone
Severed by time
Separated by distance
Each left
Longing
Yearning
Praying
Wishing
Hoping
And searching
For the other
Desires grow
Out of control
With each passing day
Divided, they are
Incomplete
Slowly withering away
Beneath the weight
Of their heavy hearts
Deep within
Then perhaps
Coincidence,
By chance
They turn a corner
And face to face
They are there
For a brief moment
Time stands still
Two lonely hearts
Reunited
Two lost souls
Entwine
And become one
After a lifetime
Of searching
At long last
Twin flames
Ignite is passions
That know no bounds
Author notes
This is a special gift from myself to a good friend In AZ who is without a doubt my soul sister. My gift to her and her husband for winter solstice. May their flaming passions never die!
option 6
Written November 22nd, 2005
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Hi I love your image and poetry. Please see this site on Eternal twin flames and soul mates. Would love to have this on there to share with others. Thank you. http://atlantiantraveler.ning.com/group/eternaltwinflamesandsoulmates
blessings Brigett from Cave Creek, A -
its been awhile since i've come around and graced your pages with my presence
but as i read above your words are most graceful in recognizing the validity of your bond with another. Its always grand to see one share their emotions for another. Great work here bel.
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passionate~
A beautiful passionate poem.....
Love the pic and the background
I see you story will have to be able to sit longer to read this comming up series
Loved this...
Hugs n love
Susan~~~
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I cannot help but chuckle slightly with your comment. Not that it is comical in anyway, it's very sweet and kind and I thank you very much. But I chuckle at your grandmother being buddhist and her beliefs ONLY because the friend that I wrote this for is buddhist as well. And to see someone read this piece and make the connect and so exact I might add just kind of lightened my heart with a lil chuckle.
Thank you for your kind words and very astute abservation.
Blessings
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great job!
i really enjoyed the pace of this poem due to how many words you put per line. it also seemed so passionate. my grandmother is buddhist and she believes in reincarnation and how souls return once again after people die. this very much reminded me of her beliefs. anyway, great read; lots of heart! -
Why thank you my dear.I'm glad you liked this piece. Your kind words are much appreciated
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Celtic, a very nice read, its easy to feel the loss of not being together in this one. one part 'For a brief moment
Time stands still Two lonely hearts' this I thought was kind of stirring, you know one of those parts that set the mind to thinking. image and Visions -
So glad you liked it
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Enchanting!
WOW! Profoundly Awesome! The metaphors were OFF the chart!!!
The images were filled with affection passion and sensuality.
I really loved the depth width and breadth of this piece.
It transcended shallow lust and spoke with deep desire
the hearts yearnings! Bravo darling!
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Too many lifetimes my dear. I am still seeking mine from so long ago.
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Placing things in a cosmic context like this makes me wonder how many lives two old souls would have to spend apart before they briefly met again. Interesting thought...
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Splendid
this is very good. I like the detail. It reminds me of actual love.
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