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My Sleeping aid

The sunset reflecting on the calm night river,
Is tantalizing to my eyes,
As it goes down and the stars emerge,
The feeling of comfort gathers my nerves,
As I close my eyes and begin to dream,
Thoughts of dancing across the sky fill my mind,
To be an angel sorrowing through the clouds,
The opportunity to see the world at afar,
Taking pictures in my head,
To store up for future “need to get a way’s”
As I open my eye’s and look around me,
Everything seems to fade,
As I slip into a good night sleep,
I get another chance to get away,
This is how I fall asleep,
Its my sleeping aid.

Author notes

This poem tells you how i get to bed at night without thinking about all my problems!!
Written November 22nd, 2005

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