Dawn’s almost here,
My lover comes near.
We are force to hide,
In fear we might die.
We are not meant to be.
For we are sworn enemies.
At least are father’s are,
But I hear footsteps afar.
In fear of what could go wrong,
I hurry my lover along.
This had been the day.
We’d planned to run away.
We had given them some time,
In hope they would change their minds.
But that wasn’t the case,
And time we cannot waste.
We have to move fast,
Their rage will someday pass.
Then this feud can no longer last.
And without another sound,
We slowly turn around
Knowing we have let them down.
We leave it all behind,
For our future we must find.
Author notes
Written November 22nd, 2005
Abbie Nichole Forbidden Love
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good poem, i liked the flow of it, it was good, the poem was excellent, and good luck in the contest
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please give me an idea of what you were referring to, and then i'll give you a real comment
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HM...I concur with teddy and keara does give off a sense of shakespeare perhaps this is where you derived the idea? Very nicely written. thanks for entering good luck
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Yes thats it!! Shakesperean like..
I really liked it...Keara -
reminds me alot of Romeo & Juliet
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