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Only in the faint memories

I watched that love die,
and I cried as I saw the ashes fall to hells gates.
I thought of him as everything,
nothing seemed to bring me down, not even my father.

I have fallen in love twice,
and they were honestly the best times of my life,but ended in hurt & vein.
I am hoping that you and I can break this cycle,
of broken hearts and torn apart souls.

I wont lie to you,
I still think of him,
in those faint memories.

I have hidden behind the crimson door for way too long.
I have been up and down this road many times...
You said you would never hurt me,
I'm trying to take your word on this,
Dont lie to me please; I know I cannot take this again.

With his venomous kiss,
I now see I was only trying to kill the loneliness.
Somehow out of nowhere,
the warmth within your arms caught me whenever I fell.

Dont do what he did to me,
I beg of you please
I was only killing loneliness with him,
how could I have been such a fool......

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My realization...
stupid, yes, but I had to get it out.
Written November 22nd, 2005

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  • JadedKitty
    October 24, 2006
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    Touching

    touching, I feel you.. Killing time with someone else... Not wanting your heart broken... falling in love is dangerous.. Try not to fall into love unless you can find your way out alone... good thing to live by...


  • chyld of the shadow
    November 23, 2005
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    I love you donna.

  • Zyi
    November 23, 2005
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    I love you too and no need for thanks.

  • Somebodys Hero
    November 22, 2005
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    Awsome

    Hey Donna, I love this is really shows the emotion in you, I hope everything is fine because nothin that goes on with me is good at the moment and wont be for a while but I got you and Jessi to help me through it thanks I love you!!!!!!!!!SO MUCHES!!!!!
    Sissy

  • gummy razorblades
    November 22, 2005
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    This is one of your best I love it more than anything, this is one of your best ever!

    I hope that you and Adam are doing great, and that everthing is okay with yall, Josh was confused when I told him that Adam thought those poems were about you...he was like no there are about Lacey, why would he think that there about Donna?

    It was weird to talk to him.

    but anyways I have to watch my show...

    loves you!

    Jessi


  • Realistic Nightmare
    November 22, 2005
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    awww..donna i loved it...its not stupid at all..i love you and keep up the awesome work on your poems..i will try caliin you in a little while..okies?
    loves you
    XxX

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