Upon silken sheets
My body moves with dance
With a slightest motion
Locking your eyes to a trance
Delicate white lace
Caressing every curve
Tantalizing with teasing grace
To your body's every nerve
Fingers moving slowly over my body
As though a blind person reading in braille
As orgasmic delights un-forbidden
Hidden beneath its lacey veil
Lusciously moist half parted lips
Your flaming passions now grow
Softly moaning with sighing breaths
Setting your fire to a kindled glow
Down my neck and over my breasts
My fingers so gingerly travel
To this sight now before you,
Excitingly you sit to marvel
Hips ethereally swaying
Self pleasuring is my introduction
My body now longing for touch
Increasing heights of your seduction
Bewitchingly with a finger tip dance
Explorations of my hidden treasure
Down my thighs and back again
Intensifying your need of my pleasure
You entrancing gleam with hungry eyes
Longing for your touch of me
Yearning with the desire to partake
Wanting to set my bodies fire free
My fingers fade and disappear
Beneath the enchanting lace
Melodious moans echo the escape
As moistened lips are followed in trace
Hips rising, back arching up
As my body takes wings to its flight
On a journey together one
Becoming an orgasmic delight
My emerald eyes lock upon yours
With a flickering of my finger
I motion you forth with a whisper
"Come hither, sweet love, come hither"
Author notes
Thanks for the suggestions Mally! Love ya sweetie 
Written November 22nd, 2005
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I found this to be very tasteful erotica. Well done here
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a bad bad bad girl just the way I like it
naughty naughty naughty keep reading this and who the hell knows where I'll end up at 
love and light
blaze -
very good
oh my, i think a little bit more going on after the "flirting" you are naughty he he he good luck in the contest x -
AAAwwwwwww sis,
Thank you..... ya so sweet
Love ya, Your Wickedly Evil Wench of a Sister
Bel -
I enjoy a good erotic and trust me you write it well..
Loves ya, Your Wicked Sinner Sis, Cat
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P.S. That is my review per request of my dear friend Kain. So hot in here! I am hallucinating! lol
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Thank you so very much.
I am truly flattered that you have enjoyed this piece so much.
I had quite an enjoying time writing it myself
Thank you for your very kind words.
Blessings
celticmoon -
HOT HOT HOT HOT!
My dear Celticmoon,
Your seduction, charming and ravishing with the highest degree of heat oozing wildly! The teasing, tantalizing moves, meooooooooooooowwwwwwwww, I can’t help it! Lol, I am a cat that is meowing reading your poem. I have to stop and put my mind somewhere else. LOL. Every word, every line has been transcribed with so much intensity and zest!
Kain darling, Celticmoon finger tip dance is so bewitching! HOLA! Imagine that!
It is very exciting, a poem that erupted like a volcano with hot molten lava flowing with every move you make!
Now my dearest Kain, don’t just sit in there, consume that fire of passion that celticmoon is offering, take that journey together and have the orgasmic delight!
Oh la la!
P.S. I love the rhymes that fit to the heat of passion in the highest degree! To this I give you my applause!
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Glad you enjoyed this piece.
Thank you for your comment
Blessings
celticmoon -
Yeah, dance for me! Dance for me! goes to stick head in freezer Woah, hot hot hot! My legs are like jelly, and I'm sitting down! Wow, wow, wow.. Those words, individually, are so innocent. But put them all together, and steam rises from this male heart! Damnit, where the hell is the drooling icon?! There really should be one..
Yours in lust,
Kain
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this is very hot,not to much just the right amount,telling the right amount to keep flow going to an up beat rhythm,thanks for a good read---kirby
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Thank you much for your kind words, much appreciated
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Self indulgence is a must from time to time. Yes, this is very passionate indeed.
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You think reading them is bad? Try having to contain yourself until you have finished writing the piece whewn your inspiration is teasing you. Not an easy task...LOL
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I REALLY need to stop reading this stuff at work. Celt, you have done it again and this time I really need a shower for the second time today. This is not fair woman... not fair at all!
Fantastic work by the way! LOL.. hugs
Sylvyr -
Erotic!
Very nice! A fascinating exploration into the wonderful world
of self pleasure. Each line conjured images of erotic bliss.
The detail of this sensually fullfilling experience was
quite awesome. I could imagine in my minds eye a drooling
group of eager stallions witnessing this ecstasy in motion.
Waiting and hoping to inquire in your sacred chambers.
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Thank you for your kind words, much appreciated.
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Captivating
Oh this is Luscious, filled with the heat of passion, and the smooth glide of sensuality....making it one stirring read!
hugs,
Nicole -
So glad you enjoyed it. And thanks for your comment, much appreciated
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excellent piece
wow i dont now where to begin i was enthralled by the sublty of your words and yet enraptured by the way you descibe your lust definatelty keep up the good work -
Glad you enjoyed it hun. As always thank you for your sweet words
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excellent write dear bel...you take the mind on a whole new level of exploration for sensuality. loving it. your rhythm is enticing and the deliverance of the subject matter is quite arousing.
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really nice
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I thank you kind for your sweet words. They are geatly appreciated.
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The key to writing such pieces is to have to be imaginative, creative, and have one hell of an inspiration....LOL
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Excellent Steamy Write
Excellent Steamy write dear. But then again , I am one of your biggest fans. You alway's have such great rhythm with your words. If I could write as good as you, i surely would have a dozen trophies right now. Keep writing, and keep teaching me how to right that sexy stuff! lolol -
excellent writing
Phewwwwwww. This is a very hot one celticmoon. You describe your emotions and sexual desire so well in this poem. I think you have this contest wrapped up as a big Gold Trophy for yourself.
I enjoyed reading.
etherealforu
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