Sweet dreams my love
Sleep like an angel
and think of me always
Love to be with you
but ocean keep us apart
Sweet dreams my darling
Sleep deep and forget the world
and let me come in to your dreams
Want to be in your arms
but I am far away from you
Sweet dreams my angel
Sleep well while night hugs you
and keep your heart open for me
Want to say how much I love you
but my loneliness makes me sad
Author notes
Few of my thoughts on my dreams !
Written November 22nd, 2005
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Your love is truly unbounded, as you say through this poem.Feelings always overflow its banks,just as you wish it to be. wishing you all the best...Venu
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Great
Very sweet. But as said sad through disconnection at the same time. Good, simple piece -
Makes me wonder what the story is behind this sad piece...it's like there is no hope of a reconnection-I'm so use to reading happy endings and I wish you had one. This was told well and your feelings were conveyed clearly.~vj
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Great poem as usual....good flow and I like the emotion in this poem.It is so real and that is just a good thing for any poet.
Short and good.
nellymichelle. -
great story,formed structured nicely, good choice of words, like the it all came together for you as a poem waiting to be expressed, thank you for sharing..Linda
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amazing short write here friend. this is really wonderful emotion you show with a great expression of love.This is just lovely. well i just love to read your poems of love.
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awsomely good!i
this is really good the emotion you show and how you expresses the love she is trying to show to him but cant because there is a barrier that seperates them i like how you put in the dreaming thing i love dreams and i love them even more now this poem is really good and i do beleive the hats off should be to you nt to me!i
with much love
!istephi! -
This is a poem that reveals the inner longing of the persona to be reunited with his/her love across the atlantic.Good word flow endears the poem through the illustrative and captivating
spectacles into the mind of the reader.GREAT WRITE!KEEP IT UP! -
Aw how sad I hope you are reunited with your love
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Good!...I like this!
This is just lovely!...really nice imagery evoked by this...very romantic poem!....i like it!
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