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Dog Food with Five meats

Feed me! Oh, Feed me!
Must. Have. Fooood.
Gimme now, Gimme more!
Take away my hunger mood!

Let me munch,
Let me slurp.
Let me gobble.
Let me burp.

Sausage, beef, steak or chicken!
Which one will I soon be lickin'?

O' I know what I love to eat..
Farmland Dog Food with Five meat!!

Author notes

MmmmmmMmmmm.. five meats...
Written November 22nd, 2005

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  • Romeos captive
    November 29, 2005
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    Hey! this is the one i read a couple of days ago yeah? yeah. I like this piece so much! It always makes me happy to read. Keep writing dude

    Zizee

  • nothing-important
    November 25, 2005
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    LOL!! we buy that stuff!! lol this was cool! i loved it!! you should write more!!


  • Black Panic
    November 22, 2005
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    Haha, this rocks Annie!
    Laughter is the greatest medicine and I bet this fixed a lot of people. You're a great poet & hope ya keep writing.
    -Moni


  • Crazychook
    November 22, 2005
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    Hey Annie! Nice work! Absolutely, positively, fantastic! It has to be one of the more entertaining poems that I have read in a while! I loved it! Keep up the great work Annie, and you sure made my day Well done.

    Luv Always
    Meelz

  • Zealous
    November 22, 2005
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    hehe sick!!! i like this... dont usually read about this typa stuff... i thought you'd prefur human food? hehe funny that!


  • Confusicus
    November 22, 2005
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    Lol wow, you get sooooooo many more comments than me. Must be because you're so talented. Shown this to Alex? He'd love it lol.

  • IDreamAlot
    November 22, 2005
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    LOL


  • lovealotbear
    November 22, 2005
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    Yes, I have two dogs myself and I wrote this poem while watching one of them eat their tea! Thanks for the comment!

    Lovealotbear


  • Uhs Feth Malorn
    November 22, 2005
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    This is truly disgusting....euh....absolutely revolting and really not at all nice....

    BUT I LOVED IT!


  • lovealotbear
    November 22, 2005
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    Thankyou! Glad you enjoyed it!

    Never stop laughing!
    Lovealotbear

  • JETS jets jets jets
    November 22, 2005
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    Very cute poem. I really liked it alot. I have five dogs and it hard keeping them all happy in the food department. They eat well getting chiken and or beef about three times a week mixed in with there dry dog food. Anyhow this made me smile and I thank you for that. Great job! Thanks for sharing.


  • blueyez
    November 22, 2005
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    funny

    That was freakin funny.

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