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Wonderful Tonight

I fell in love with you
    at your Mother's wedding,
    dancing to Eric Clapton,
 your arms tightly wrapped around me,
       us swaying to the music.
   Couples dancing all around us,
          yet,
   we were the only ones on that dance floor.
      Just you and me.
          I was lost in the music,
       the sweet scnet of axe,
           the warmth of your body,
       and the beating of your heart.
   I was lost in you.

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I fell in for him.
Written November 22nd, 2005

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  • mysticlabyrinth
    November 22, 2005
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    i love it! i hope you end up with him and its a great write too! love ya!

  • falling through
    November 22, 2005
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    be-u-tiful darlin! i lovers you! very good...xoxoxoxo..lacey


  • LemonDropAngel
    November 22, 2005
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    awww sounds cute and sweet great job xoxo

  • sweetheart4rain
    November 22, 2005
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    aww...you didnt tell me about this..lol..but anyways..sounds like a sweet moment..luv ya lots
    *kisses*
    -Britt


  • bluidbabiegirl
    November 22, 2005
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    I love it.... very detailed....gives a image...great write


  • mystic oceania
    November 22, 2005
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    Well you've been busy. Great write, I loved it.
    ~mystic

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