Our cove of dreams
God, sailing dreams yar
on my yacht see
named the SS Sahabah
for betrothed by me.
Seas reflect golden champagne
caught full sails breeze
amidst hot briny rain
your love carries me.
Cooking in galley below
every line so tight
lying naked in stow
your sweet buttocks alright.
Your brunette auburn hair
my hazel reflective eyes,
flecks reddish golden airs
all inspire my sighs.
As we moor lull
you kiss my neck
at nameless abandoned atolls
I caught your peck.
In your galley comprises
a meal I drank
homemade sweet gourmet surprises
Great God I thank.
Meditating before golden sunset;
you naked follow too
to strip, dive, wet
swimming onto beaches cool.
Your lush breasts peek
I discover flowering lips
my tongue slips beneath
orchids below your hips.
Your teeth bite too
as I enter ooh
and then you coo
wonderful honeymoon vows renewed.
Swimming back to yacht
rising from the sea
only by moonlight caught
bashfully dried by me.
by Abdul Tawala Ibn Ali Alishtari
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Dream Aba....
sweet dreams... -
And we sail...
into our dreams
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My Jinn
My wish is granted.
My smile is evidence
from your heart surplanted
I have no defense.
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Whenever I buy a boat
I will Christen it
the SS Beloved Companion
if not Sahabah fit
for a Queen's abandon.
Orpheus -
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now here's a sensual erotic poem that is beautiful and tasteful and majestic and sweet. why can't people write more erotica like this and less like porn. i don't enjoy the word pussy.
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Thank you a lot
your hint I got
but yes you save
your fellings well behaved. -
very hot
very hot erotic,i like it so much as all your poemsI wish if i can show you how the moslim women can understand you.You know what i mean.Great work. -
Believe it or not when I write hot erotic I am getting in touch with my feminine side. I will send you two pieces in a contest. They are direct but also pure poetry. If you prefer not please advise and I will respect that too. To be loved by a bird a tree is happy but to be intertwined with a fellow tree is bliss. Thank you so much for your respect and consideration.
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This is indeed a dream to wish for. I can't decide which dream I'd rather have...the hot-tub in the snow or this yach-experience on a tropical island...hmmmmm?? The "autumn leaves" makes me think of two leaves just drifting in the cool blue waters...floating away. A very lovely and elegant poem about true bliss. You do have a romantic steak in you and you know how to combine that with sensuality. I want a dream like this too...
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~ Nicolette
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Glad you like it. AP Mom.
Edited on Nov 24, 9:12 p.m. because 'XOXOXOXOXOXOXOXO'. -
AT: I love this combination of brain and fingertips which creates a dream world of sensual delights. Beautiful. Well done, my son. Joy
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You are most welcome, my dear.
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A wonderfully senusal piece of love and all its glory. You whisk your reader off into the very place you create. A most wondrous talent you ahve.
Blessings
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Come join my contest.
At 52 years of age I like putt putts, motor yachts more, but when I was younger and vim, I was a rag man, meaning full mast sailor. In a motor yacht, I don't have to do the work which is back breaking and there is more time for, well, honeymooning. LOL. -
A most beautifully sensual poem; loved it from line to line! Very tastefully and wonderfully done! Thank you for sharing, poet friend!
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XOXOXOXO
Writers live for readers
and readers for writers
despite all other strife
always enjoy good writes.
I like your work
watching growth in spurts
losing contests sometimes hurts
like cultivating harvest earth.
To grow the best
we churn the rest
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Very nice Amazigh. Sweet and romantic. Bravo. Your words are coming from your sunny soul and makes me to wish:
I will try to find hidden cove of dreams of my own
And I hope that there I am not going to be alone.
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A very well written piece Amazigh & I thank you kindly for the invite to read You have an easy rhyme/near-rhyme scheme going on that flows well. Thanks again. La x
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Bravo!! sweet brother..fantastic sensual poetry from your fingers to the site,we need lessens from you, bro..Keep writing and rhyming, Linda
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