the more i cry out for your love
the less that you display
the more i try to make you care
the more it goes away
the more i plead for your attention
the less that i receive
The more i ask for reassurance
the more that you deceive
The more i go to bed depressed
the less that you pretend
the more i realise what we are
the more i cant comprehend
the more overwhelming i become
the less i want to speak
the more frustrated you get with me
the more our prospects look bleak
the more you want to run away
the less im willing to fight
to keep you here to keep you near
to keep us working right
Ive thought alot about us
and I have the secret to our success
You need to start caring more
and i need to start caring less.
Author notes
Written November 21st, 2005
shannon forbidden love
A contest entry
- Forbidden Love by Ignis Corpus.
425 points, ended July 17, 2007, 36 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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the more i cry out for your love
the less that you display
the more i try to make you care
the more it goes away
the more i plead for your attention
the less that i receive
The more i ask for reassurance
the more that you deceive
those lines are beautiful the flow of the poem is excellent, good job and good luck in the contest -
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i really really liked it it reminds me of well... me!
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