Sacred spiral whirls around
Each time higher off the ground
Technicolor Kodachrome
Imagination skyward blown
Crayola dreams in black and white
Simple voices ears of right
Open spirit symphony
Silence of our harmony
Sacred spiral whirls around
Each time higher off the ground
Velvet merchant's golden hue
By candle light or morning view
Sunset garnet fade to night
Face the dreaming or the fright
Etchings from the fingertip
Star-shine inkwell quillish dip
Sacred spiral whirls around
Each time higher off the ground.
Author notes
Minimal punctuation intended to allow the reader greater freedom to draw individual personal conclusions. Let me know if color of font or background hamper readability.
Written November 20th, 2005
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This is a fascinating poem. It reminds me of high-thinking creatures and meditation. The flow is good and the poem in general is well-organizied. I wonder why there aren't more comments on this one, but I suppose there are plenty of good poems without many comments.
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Clearly the magician in the picture inspired the encantational piece.The formed lines and rapid flow are done very well.~~~Suseann
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Very impressive and flows so smoothly, like an enchantment itself. You can easily see the images here. It has the power to open the mind and let the spirals carry you away. Nice rhyme as well. Even without knowing the picture that inspired it, easily you've mastered its essence here. Great piece
Blessings, Gypsy
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