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shes only pretty when she's sad

shes only pretty when she's sad
you only love her when your moon outshines her
you only need her when your mad
so she can feel your pain through your hands

scream without a reason
because screams are what it takes
scream for some forgiveness
because you don't have a fucking say

praying for a tidal wave
wanting to see the ground give way
wanting to see it all come down
to be gone again without a sound

and you'll scream for no reason
because screams are what it takes
scream for forgiveness
you never got a fucking say

great lovers make great enemies
cut until you bleed boy
cut until you bleed
just cut until you bleed boy
cut until you bleed

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Written November 20th, 2005

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  • living to die
    November 20, 2005
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    thankyou!!


  • pianoman13
    November 20, 2005
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    Sad and incredibly powerful. It feels like anger in your writing when I read this. Powerful feelings.