Within the mind of reason,
hides a hidden quelled verse.
Written in the book of wisdom,
but to the closed eye of ego cursed.
It's message couldn't be clearer,
to the enlightened open mind.
Universal answers seen in a mirror,
not the intellect's eye refined.
Close the eyes of living flesh,
read it with your inner soul.
Answers of the cosmos professed,
immortal age old stories told.
For those that seek it's knowledge,
glimpse it's treasured gilded verse.
But those that have a need to say I,
are blinded by egotism's curse.
~~~Suseann~~~
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Author notes
won a silver.Amunet Wolfbane's Enchantment run off contest.
Written November 20th, 2005
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"closed eye of ego"...couldn't be more apt of an image! I like how this weaves the mystery of the artwork with the realities of shallow soul. As one
can expect, the rhyme and flow are wonderful
and smooth goes the journey down the page.
Blue
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This sounds very mystical and enchanting, and I loved it, wonderful rhyming and good picture too.
Keep up the excellent work.
best wishes as always
xElectricEyezx
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this is absolutely fantastic susie......and with such lovely rhyme......beautiful story and flowing with your imaginations wonderfully penned.....Im impressed with this writing....you do very well with myth and magic.....I love this very much...poet...
Hugs with applause....
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GREAT
Great poem. Flowed really well. I really really liked it. I like your style of writing. You are better then me. Keep it up! I will be back to read more of your poetry. Sorry, I am trying to read more poetry from everyone, but i am never on
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