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A Haiku

I heard the music
Much louder than a gunshot
Then, there was silence.

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Written November 20th, 2005

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  • confusedsoul666
    November 21, 2005
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    yes, I see where thats coming from. what i was trying to mean though was like "and then there was silence" like the music was so loud and then suddenly it was silent type of thing. idk, i'll change the top line to fit the bottom and see what i can do.