Behind this monitor
I sit alone
Right click
Left click
Copy and paste
Open and close
Saving files
Extracting others
Sending emails
Camming with friends
Opening my diaries
Letting people in
Penning my life
Posting it here
Sharing it with all
My story written
But there is
Still so much more
To me than anyone
Can truly see
Behind emerald green eyes
Lies a world no one see
A place I keep
Locked away from reality
It's my place to
Dwell and dream
So many have tried
To find the key
Unlock that world
And truly know me
Til this day
None have succeeded
I doubt anyone will
But should there
Come a day
When the lock is broken
It will be to them
My heart a gift
For they have unlocked
The dairies of me
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Written November 20th, 2005
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Such beautiiful words of inner secrets that not only you hold. For we all have secrets thoughts and ideas. It is only when we speak of them that we realize we are not alone. Connections are made, bridges, when we decide to share our truest heart with others. Some can read us so easily, while others can only skim the surface. You know the difference between the who cans and the who cannots. The ones who can, very few, snatch your special place up in a minute, take up residency and live within your heart forever.
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i know i've taken my damn sweet time to get to ur pieces, but i am here now. Your flow is great and it captures the reader, drawing them into your world...into your world of truths, but not of your trueself. So much more than just words on a screen, more than just streaming pixels in a cam...i applaud your heart and the aching for one true soul to connect with your inner self.
great write sweet bel
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very true we all need our place of refuge,to know ones self is to know our limates thanks---lov
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You have put into words love what many of us feel when we sit down at a computer nowadays. Congrats on a great piece of work! You have a talent that needs to be put into print through a publisher. I hope to see that happen
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excellent~
Penned beautifully
You are correct there is only so much one see's on the screen and not behind it.....
I too think you a very warm and loving soul sister......with many
extra valueable traits thrown in no one else has seen
Perfect sweetie
Love n hugs
Susan~~~
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You truly are a gift, no doubt, and I surely appreciate you lots, and I consider it an honour to read and know what I do about you..You're a very loving soul, and I'm very thankful for that..we need more like you, but one will do!
-Timothy
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Smiley I truly believe if the right person never comes alo9ng the lock will remain forever. It will open be capable of being opened by the "one" but as I said I am not holding my breath. I seriously doubt it will ever happen.
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Rob,
Thank you for your kind words. You always say the sweetest things
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This is a very beautiful and passionately penned poem of ones inner heart and soul, And the images you have painted upon this
Bountiful page are amazing may the one who finally brings fourth
The key to your world of passion be the king of all your dreams come true and may you both reign together for an eternity of love thank you for allowing me to read and comment upon your work.. -
So often we write and many seem to think what we write is what we are, but in reality it is just one lil part of us. There is so much more that no one sees. I keep a large part of myself locked away from the world. What I write is a minute piece of who I am. To truly know me one must first get beyond the walls within me, no easy feat I might add.
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Amen.. So often I think they have no clue in reality what kind of a person I am just because of what I write here.. Good Write, Whisper
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wonderfully written.. Well expressed.. when that lock is broken I hope that it is the right person. So you will cherish a life time together.
Yvonne
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