Blood upon the sword
In your mind and in your heart
The ghost of lost souls
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It's so...small! I mean, I know they're *supposed* to be short for a Haiku, but... my poems are usually so long! ^^()
Written November 19th, 2005
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Wow, thank you so much for this review! Usually people don't have much to say about Haiku's, so this was a blessing to me ^^
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Great
Oo!
Haiku's are my favorite, I love this one.. so brutal and passionate.
It really does bring up alot of burried feelings, alot of mental reminders of a life that is.. less fortunate than many. I love the last line, it's such a great follow up after the first to.. kind of like sending your point accross.. like the final move in chess. Haiku's can be made or broken by the ending line and here.. it's very nice, it leaves something to be imagined but it's not like a closing of a book.. as some are.
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An excellent and unique Haiku. WEll written and vivid
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Death to all!
Hmmm. I think it sucks. Hah, no I just kid. Gotcha! *poke* I didn't know you wrote haiku. But I guess there's a first for everything. Like that one thing I did yesterday... *ahem* Anyway, wonderful. Now gimme some more drowness! Later!
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This is a awesome haiku. Hopefully i will be able to read more of your poems.
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whoa...super kewl!! i luv how you squeezed all of that dread and darkness into a haiku......something i bet is pretty darn difficult to do! well, lovely job! write on!!
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Bartender! a drink for this guy!
A rare meditation upon a much abused graph.
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