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From Which I Came


Echoing screams
Traveling through
Hollowed halls
Calling to me
Fighting the urge
Trying to escape
Moving shadows
Lingering about
Coldness takes over
Sucking me in
Spiraling deeper
Numbness sets in
No emotion left
Lost and alone
All doors locked
No place to turn
Unbreakable windows
Reflecting outward beauty
Locked away
Out of reach
Flames of hope
No longer burn
All is gone
Into the darkness
I fade back into
That from which I came

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Written November 19th, 2005

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  • May 30, 2006
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    I am returning the favour as you so kindly commented of one of my poems and Im really glad I did. I loved this it is indeed deep and sooo well written. great stuff


  • poeticweaver gold member
    November 20, 2005
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    Wow! Now this is deep, I like the flow, and the line, unbreakable windows, like you can see through, but can't get out, nor on the other side..great metaphors hun, pen on...

    -Timothy

  • shadedheart
    November 19, 2005
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    Really good! I love the words and the way you put them together..good job