She knew what was happening
But to her it was not real
she knew how to smile
but to her she could not feel
Alone and Lost
she would cry the blackest tears
in the corner in the dark
with out a reason to go on
She would sit she would write what she thought
what she wished was real
the happiness she longed to feel
the life she thought was once real
but they were all just thoughts
kinda like dreams
but just like them they forgot to come true
one day she didn't get up from bed
but she did not think she was dead
to her
she was still in the corner
writing the dreams that had to come true
Author notes
it is missing something and needs edited im not even sure it makes senses
Written November 19th, 2005
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stunning
Oh, no, BlindSoul, this is not missing ANYTHING! And it makes perfect sense to me because I know exactly how this feels.
'the life she thought was once real
but they were all just thoughts
kinda like dreams
but just like them they forgot to come true'
Amazing lines, there! Exactly how mine dreams are...they 'forget' to come true.
I wonder if they do ever come true...I guess I will have to get back to you on that one.
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i iiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii luuuuuuuuuuuved iiiiiiiii
stasier im sry i wasnt the first to comment you kno how my computer is lol but i loved this poem and wished i could write like this but yea it was awesome i love all your poems so much love always ~lissa~ -
wow that was really good and sad it said a lot
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i like this alot! its really good and really sad!
I love you!!
Allie
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