A sword, a dagger, money on the edges
fine, stately, attentive to the ladies.
Smooth, glossy, civil, diplomatic
planned, deliberate, aimless and erratic.
Devoured, gorged, desultory but pleasant
disturbed, troubled, presented for election.
Hunted, tracked, ostensible intention
foul, obnoxious, in the wrong direction.
Pay, deposit, waiting at the station
topple, destroy, a form of one’s resistance.
Rationale, reason, with no observed reaction
endure, submit, provide accommodation.
Compel, force, affecting the emotion
crushed, silenced, resolute determination.
Fear, terror, exposure to the dangers
perfect, ideal, paper confederation.
Spasm, shudder, descent of one’s religion
cursed, bewitched, abandoned and rejected.
Trouble, adversity, suffering and privation
arms, munitions, eagerly persisted.
Confusion, mismanaged, multiplied together
alluring, seductive, behaviorally disordered.
Unhealthy, destructive, filthy pornographic
sultry, steamy, psychological derangement.
Inhuman, bestial, a quiet separation
vicious, ferocious, satirical true statements.
Contagious, infectious, but helpful and most gracious
weak, officious, averse to rapid changes.
Continuous, unbroken, honorable intentions
ugly, misshapen, undergoing transformation.
Downward, spiraling, mysterious situation
deflowered, ravaged, complete abomination.
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Written November 19th, 2005
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A lot of angst at that... perhaps some shared as well.
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Noooooo, really? I would never have guessed..lol
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thanks, typical 'guy angst' lol
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Well now, let me see if I can't find a few words for a comment that you didn't use.....lol
A piece of truly profound qualities. Amazingly penned to sheer perfection. Some readers may very well need a dictionary.....lol
Nonetheless, a wonderfully awestriking piece of brilliance.
Blessings
Bel
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Thank you, sis- you caught me before I could upload the proper background! I'll catch you soon, too!
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Wow, I see a lot of words in this write..Let me go get my dictionary first..lol..this is lovely poem Wayne..Amazing job..it looks like you put a lot of effort and time to it..great vocabulary used..good job
ps: miss yo brother
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