there's no one better than you
you make me, me
and everyone can see
see how much I love you
and don't want to lose
lose you
for anyone
you bring me joy in all kinds of ways
but for some reason I just can't say
say how much I adore you
and that I have no idea what to do
I can't afford to lose this
there's no one better than you
with every little kiss
you spread me open
open to all
and you help me when I fall
fall into the darkness
you bring me a light
and no more fights
there's no one better
I can't lose this
I can't just miss
miss my chance
to shine!
You are the best thing that has ever happend to me!
And hopefully you can see
how much I love you
with all my heart!
there's no one better............. than you!
This is to my wonderful boyfriend Sam! I love him alot and I wanted to show him!
~Emily~
Author notes
This is to my wonderful boyfriend Sam! I love him alot and I wanted to show him!
Written November 19th, 2005
A contest entry
- love,dark,and romantic by LifeEndsNow.
300 points, ended December 6, 2005, 17 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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hey its like my good friend alovingheart said i love it this write is awsome great job and good luck to you -kevin
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wow, this poem is good too... im really glad i came back to read some of your poems... good write, i really really liked it...good write.
Chad -
this is very good and different from how you usually write, or feel. very good sis. can't wait to read another....oh, yeah I really liked the part about "You are the best thing that has ever happend to me!
And hopefully you can see
how much I love you
with all my heart!
there's no one better............. than you!"
Great job......................clara..............sis............
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hey this is a really good poem and u are a really good writter
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This is very good. Emotionally deep I love it. Keep up the wonderful work and the poem is just absolutely beautiful
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thanxz gurl yea i knowhe is awesome!!
do u have a my space if not go here-profile.myspace.com/index.cfm?fuseaction=user.viewprofile&friendID=32672307&Mytoken=12D339C6-9BC3-A87A-75B496A839432ACC2559703
and look on here and under my pics. -
"with every little kiss
you spread me open
open to all
and you help me when I fall
fall into the darkness"
great poem... I need a guy as great as this.... he sounds awesome!
luv your cousin,
cara
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great
oh that is so sweet ... your boyfriend sam seems like the best boyfriend ever...well very beautiful poem...ttyl Emily aka Ash -
thanxz i will! show him the poem! lol
love ya
emily -
The love you found is so very beautiful. It flows through your poetry and feels wonderful. If he reads this poem he will know just how much you love him. He is a very lucky person to have someone as special as you in love with him. I hope shares the feeling of true love, that connects your hearts.
Thank you so much for sharing this beautiful poem with everyone here.. I hope you share it with him as well.
Ed -
I know what are ya talking about on the piece babe , there is lots of fear when you love someone , I now am in the same boat as you... Don't be afraid , there is nothing wrong if you love him too much , just speak up what's in ur mind
Im sure he will tell you in the same things back to you too 
This poem is lots of emotion , I can really related how much you love him sweet sis! keep on writing ! and don't forget to show this poem to Sam He will just smile and gives you a lil kiss upon on ur lips! 
believe me coz i did before lol 
Always love
xxx
-paper-
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