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Drowning



Day in
Day out
Night after night
Clawing
Scratching
Fighting
To hold on
Mood swings
Caused by emotions
None are mine
Planets misaligned
Causing chaos
Reeking havoc
Wells of emotions
Constantly overflowing
Flooding the soul
Clouding the mind
Drowning the heart
Erratically being tossed
On emotional waves
Of epic proportions
Frantically grasping
For life support
Trying to stay afloat
No end in sight
Emotional battles
Rage onward
In a horrific war

Author notes

The effects of Mercury in retrograde on an empath.
Written November 19th, 2005

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  • poeticweaver gold member
    November 20, 2005
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    This sounds like me in the mornings, before I have my coffee.. LOL! OK, not funny, but one can try eh...Very deep, descriptive, and flows wonderful! Thanks for sharing hun!

    -Timothy


  • Blushfulmoon silver member
    November 19, 2005
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    excellent~

    Wow sis
    These are some poweful mood swings that Mercury has hold on you
    Excellent poem and great imagery.......
    I umm got up a new one too drop by when ya can
    Love n hugs
    Susan~~~~