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Invisiable

Not heard, thought of, looked at, talked about, or noticed, to you I am forever invisible.

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Written November 19th, 2005

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  • leander Moderators member
    November 22, 2005
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    Unfortunately this is something a lot of people will be able to relate to... love can be so horrible sometimes, when the other person just fails to even notice you exist... well captured! I wish you the best of luck in the contest

    Leander


  • Malabu
    November 20, 2005
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    this would lower my esteem more then I care to do to myself.....guess life is crule and love is even more so.....but oh what a joy....when it acknowledges us.. love the thoughts floating in my mind on this...
    Huggs
    Malabu


  • iwishuponastar14
    November 20, 2005
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    sad sad sad sad
    great job
    i <3 this one alot
    good luck
    xoxo
    kayla

  • natster
    November 19, 2005
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    wow, reading this almost made me sad. this sentence definitly had a lot of emotion packed into it, thanks for entering and good luck!

    ♥
    ---*natalie*---