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For once I wish you could see

For once I wish you could see
The inside of me,
The true feelings kept beneath
This layer of burnt skin,
Burnt to the last degree

Sorrow is my burden
And my emotions never stop flooding
Just like my tears that are now consuming
Everything I once found dear
No one would stay near

Turn me inside out
And no matter how much you shout,
No matter how much you try
There will still be this pain devouring inside

Check to see the truth
Everything will seem clear,
Clear as my blood-stained uncouth words
Hang them on the burning tree with the mockingbirds.

- Casey Greene

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Written November 19th, 2005

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  • ButerfliSpirit
    November 24, 2005
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    wow, that was really deep and really showed me your emotions. good luck!